If you have time...

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could you check out the website I wrote for the Wausau Curling Club.

Any comments would be appreciated. Pointing out mistakes would be really appreciated.

Thanks!

Comments

[donnickcottage.livejournal.com]

It looked good to me lass, save one item. In the anecdote page you tie the thirties to ww2. We didn't enter the war until the 40s. That ship may have been sunk in the 30s but no curlers would have been lost unless they joined European armies. You might want to try and find another time specific detail, or highlight the ship story alone. I'm no proofreader, but I didn't spot any mistakes.

[partly.livejournal.com]

Thanks! i will have to fix that date problem.

Happy to hear it looks good.